The first chapter is sixteen pages long, and is filled with descriptions of the characters. Physical attributes are penned as each one is introduced, with enough backstory to place them in the overall scene. And then nothing happens. A suicide has brought the characters together, and I guess that the reader would want to turn the pages to discover why a man might kill himself, but the pacing is not high speed.
How perfect! Who is the agent that represented this novel, that looks for stories that unfold slowly? Surely I should send a query to her, someone who appreciates a style that I also prefer. After a few rejections that complained of slow pacing, I would be a fool not to pursue this person. It is easy enough to find out who represents whom through
In a way, that explains why agents say that literary type fiction is a hard sell. Few agents rep it, and those that do are so swamped that they won't take on anyone new unless they are particularly stellar, and an unpublished author is not usually on top of the game. Back to square one. Anyone else out there like well written character driven narratives that move at a comfortable pace and then suck the reader in slowly?
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